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posted by [identity profile] hello-spikey.livejournal.com at 01:29pm on 05/06/2008
Give him a couple more years of Angel treating him like shit and getting kicked in the ass by the world and he might be fucked up enough to give it a try.

GUUUUUH!!

Just thought I'd start out here with the guh-iest line, to me.

Oh, darling, you are a goddess of the form. This is so hot and steamy! Every step is so steeped in characterization! They are so them, and so nuanced, and, conveniently, so hot!

I love Wes's progression from unsure to pouncing to wanton! You peel back the layers to show us the wonderful complexity that is the Wes!

And Lindsey! Wesley warns him off Darla and his response is a typical "I know"! Oh, Linds! *hugs the devil-may-care fool*

I adored the pictures you painted, from Lindsey struggling with his pants (and who can blame Wes for pouncing? HAWT!) to Wesley's fluttering eyelashes... you put me in the scene so close I'm afraid I might have gotten some drool on Lindsey's back, there. :)



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posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 06:23pm on 05/06/2008
Glad you liked that line. I like thinking about future!Wes who is almost as dirtybadwrong as Lindsey is. :)

I'm thrilled you liked this, and that you thought it worked, because I was trying to keep it true and fit it into canon and keep everyone themselves (you know, as much as you can for having two people screw who probably wouldn't *g*).

Thanks so much, honey :)
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