rockstarpeach: (Impala)
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Okay, so [livejournal.com profile] tiptoe39 is hosting a WAFF-a-THON, so hurry on over and check it out, for all your feel-good needs.

I saw a prompt there, left by [livejournal.com profile] peroxidepest17, which said Cas asks the Impala for Dean’s hand in marriage and immediately decided that fic needed to exist!

Now, a prompt like that is all but begging for schmoopy, happy crackfic. So of course that’s not what I wrote. I can’t believe I wrote Cas asking the Impala if he can marry Dean, and it’s NOT crackfic.

Yikes. Anyway, fic!

Title: Extraordinary
Pairing: Dean/Cas, Epic, non-romantic love between Dean and the Impala
Rating: G
Summary: Castiel wants Dean’s hand in marriage, but there’s someone he needs to run it past, first. Someone who claimed responsibility for Dean long before Castiel came into the picture.
Word count: 700


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Castiel is fully aware that the Impala is a car.

He also knows, however, that she’s far more than just a car, more than the metal and rubber and sleek black paint that make up her outsides. She is the single most important object in all of creation. She has saved the world, just as surely as Dean or Sam or the hunters who came before them. And while she doesn’t have any kind of true consciousness, not exactly, she does have an energy, a spirit so vast that it only fits inside her tiny steel frame by virtue of God’s grace.

She is loyal to a fault, fiercely protective. She’s been taking care of Dean since he came into this world, she’s followed him tirelessly, given him shelter, carried him when he was weak and tired and on the brink of sanity. She’s gone to her death for him more than once and she’ll do it a thousand times over if that’s what it takes to keep him safe.

She’s been there for him, always, and he for her. They’ve faced countless trials, obstacles nearly impossible to surmount and they’ve come through the other side, because they had each other.

If you were to ask Dean, he’d probably tell you that Sam is the reason he’s still standing. Castiel supposes that’s true enough, but the Impala has carried them both on more than one occasion, when they were too tired to walk.

Dean inherited much of his character from John and from Mary, but it was the Impala that nurtured him, molded him into the person he is today. She was there when he held Sam, sleeping in the back seat and promised that he'd take care of him, always, no matter what. She was there when he learned to drive, when he was afraid, when he needed to feel safe. She was there when he went on his first hunt and had his first kiss, when John told him he was proud of him, that he'd done well. She eased him through childhood, helped him grow into a man and she did it all, selflessly.

Castiel owes her a great debt.

“I will never take him from you,” Castiel tells her. His voice is low as he places one palm flat on her hood. It’s dark outside, city lights miles away and the moon is new. Dean and Sam are inside, sleeping. This conversation is only for the two of them.

She says nothing, her cool, black exterior remains still and silent. She’s listening, though.

“He loves you and he needs you, always. As long as his heart beats he will move Heaven and Earth to keep you whole, to keep you with him. Even if he doesn’t truly understand why.”

The wind picks up and whips through the tall, unkempt grass that’s growing alongside the rough gravel of the driveway. It dies down again just as quickly. Still, the Impala says nothing.

“I have made a promise. To myself, to my father, to…” He trails off briefly, his fingers tense and flex, curl as if to dig gently into the smooth lines of her hood. “I have made a promise that I will spend the rest of my days protecting Dean from harm, fighting at his side. I will spend the rest of time loving him.”

A stone pops and skids at his toe, settles down pressed against the ridges of a tire.

“I would like to make that same promise to Dean. I would like to tell him, through my words and my actions and through the holy bond of matrimony, that I will always and forever devote myself to him. I would like his hand in marriage.”

Nothing happens. Of course nothing happens. She may be extraordinary, but she is a car.

“I just thought…” he starts. He smiles slightly, ducks his head and lets out a small huff. “You’ve been taking care of him far longer than I have. And I thought you’d like to know.”

Castiel raises his head and sets his shoulders back. He takes a breath and he looks down at his hand, barely any contrast at all in the low light between pale skin and jet black paint. He leans into the touch, fingers and palm pressing down just a little bit harder.

It’s a handshake, a clap on the shoulder. An embrace.

For just a moment, for one split, out-of-time second before he stands straight and withdraws his hand, he feels a warmth at his fingertips. Just a whisper, the faintest touch, an anomaly that human skin would write off as imagination, if they even noticed at all.

But Castiel's perception is extraordinary.

And so is this car.

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posted by [identity profile] rog457.livejournal.com at 11:58pm on 11/03/2013
I can picture Cas with his hand on the hood, his head bowed pledging is life and his love to Dean and to Baby. Love it!
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:04pm on 12/03/2013
Thanks :) It's a nice picture, isn't it?
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posted by [personal profile] sammichgirl at 12:14am on 12/03/2013
How did you DO that without it being schmoopy crackfic? And it's SO very Cas!

Baby is very extraordinary. <3
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:05pm on 12/03/2013
She is! I can just picture Cas talking to her, like she's listening :)
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posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:05pm on 12/03/2013
Yes! Baby is awesome!
 
posted by [identity profile] tiptoe39.livejournal.com at 01:26am on 12/03/2013
You are a magical existence without whom the world would be an infinitely darker place.

MAGICAL.
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:05pm on 12/03/2013
No, YOU!
 
posted by [identity profile] strangefancy.livejournal.com at 01:41am on 12/03/2013
This was wonderful!
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:06pm on 12/03/2013
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] movielover44.livejournal.com at 01:51am on 12/03/2013
I know this was supposed to be a shmoopy crackfic - but you honestly had me crying through most of it. (kind of like when Chuck was narrating the beginning of Swan Song). She is the unsung hero of so many episodes. I just have a lot of Impala feels ok? Don't look at me rn.

Great fic hun! I will be reccing to my friends!
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:07pm on 12/03/2013
Thanks! I love the idea of Cas having the respect and the love for Baby, just like Dean :)
 
posted by [identity profile] dodger-sister.livejournal.com at 01:59am on 12/03/2013
This story should NOT be making me cry! And yet, good lord woman, I can barely see to type right now. I would blame my Awesome Time of Month but the fact is this fic is pure emotional genius.

Castiel owes her a great debt.

And the end! /tears/ Look, if you can write a fic about an angel asking a car for permission to marry his boyfriend and make someone cry - that pretty much says everything one needs to know about the level of your writing skills. (and also, how much I loveCcas & The Impala!)
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:08pm on 12/03/2013
Aw, thank you!

I love the idea of this :)
 
posted by (anonymous) at 02:14am on 12/03/2013
This is all I thought about: http://tashilover.tumblr.com/post/20590747280/pickupthatamulet-ka-na-o-he-has-standing
 
posted by [identity profile] starkat75.livejournal.com at 03:35am on 12/03/2013
Awww. I love it so much! You always write so wunderful stories! *sigh*
Yes, the Impala was/is always there for the boys and will for ever be there. It's a never ending love between them all. :)
I love Dean/Cas stories the most, so I first didn't think another couple would be so lovely to read, but I found this hot story about Dean and the Impala and never got it out of my mind since then again. LOL :)
http://archangel32489.livejournal.com/4218.html?view=8314#t8314

And here is the hot picture to the story:
http://nofatebutyourself.tumblr.com/post/37811755262/pedertastic-thescienceofjohnlock
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:10pm on 12/03/2013
Baby has their backs!

Heh, but Baby is clearly a girl :)
 
posted by [identity profile] crazyfoolstiney.livejournal.com at 04:23am on 12/03/2013
Absolutely perfect. <3
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:10pm on 12/03/2013
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] a-carnal-mink.livejournal.com at 05:04am on 12/03/2013

*icon* ;D
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:11pm on 12/03/2013
yes!
 
posted by [identity profile] robynize.livejournal.com at 05:47am on 12/03/2013
This fic. Perfection. *swoons incoherently*
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:11pm on 12/03/2013
Glad you liked :)
 
posted by [identity profile] ljunattainable.livejournal.com at 07:22am on 12/03/2013
Nice and real and visual. Not many people could have made a conversation with a car believable. Nicely achieved.
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:11pm on 12/03/2013
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] eternal-moonie.livejournal.com at 09:48am on 12/03/2013
At first I thought a video with the song Extraordinary. lol.

Absolutely LOVED this fic sweetie!

*HUGS*
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:12pm on 12/03/2013
Ha!

Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] princess-aleera.livejournal.com at 10:30am on 12/03/2013
Wow. It really wasn't crack. How did you do that? O.o

<3 <3 <3
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:12pm on 12/03/2013
It should have been crack, right? It just refused to come out that way!
 
posted by [identity profile] monteseverus.livejournal.com at 11:26am on 12/03/2013
Nice to know Baby approves of Dean's angel! This story was perfect!
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:13pm on 12/03/2013
Of course Baby approves :)

Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] hello-spikey.livejournal.com at 01:23pm on 12/03/2013
I am agog that you, of all people, took that prompt and made something tender.

Bravo.
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:14pm on 12/03/2013
I don't know what happened!

But come on, can't you just see Cas having that conversation?
 
posted by [identity profile] septembers-coda.livejournal.com at 06:07pm on 12/03/2013
I would never have guessed from the tags or summary how much I would like this! What an accomplishment-- great job! Love it. <3
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:15pm on 12/03/2013
Sometimes it's hard to get the feel of a fic across in the summary :)

But thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] fiery-fox2.livejournal.com at 06:29pm on 12/03/2013
I'm flailing over here. Oh my Chuck this was wonderful, sweet, and absolutely believable. Well worth the read. *mems*
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 11:15pm on 12/03/2013
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
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posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 03:29pm on 13/03/2013
Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] shell-77.livejournal.com at 04:44am on 13/03/2013
That was effen amazing! Loved it!
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 03:30pm on 13/03/2013
I'm glad :) Thanks so much!
 
posted by [identity profile] peroxidepest17.livejournal.com at 05:45am on 13/03/2013
BUUUUUU MY HEART. <333 This was totally and completely what I wanted when I prompted this, okay, I just want you to know this. <3
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 03:31pm on 13/03/2013
Oh yay! I was a little worried you were looking for something a bit sillier, but I'm thrilled you enjoyed this :)
 
posted by [identity profile] lamerezouille.livejournal.com at 09:54am on 13/03/2013
That's actually awesome.
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 03:32pm on 13/03/2013
I'm glad you think so :)
 
posted by [identity profile] gunsrlove.livejournal.com at 08:56pm on 13/03/2013
This is just lovely. I absolutely love Cas acknowledging the importance of the impala in Dean's life. This is really so touchingly sweet it makes me teary. I love love love the fact that Cas feels something from her that signifies her blessing, and the last line is just perfect! Saving this one to memories.
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 12:48am on 14/03/2013
Aw, thank you! Of course Baby would give her blessing! She knows Cas will take real good care of her Dean :)
 
posted by [identity profile] riveroceansea.livejournal.com at 11:16am on 14/03/2013
Beautiful. I have no other words.
 
posted by [identity profile] rockstarpeach.livejournal.com at 05:53pm on 14/03/2013
Thank you :)
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